Stretching Sentences
For Story Writing last week Mrs Dijkstra gave as a long strip of card and half a page of stickers. We wrote a sticker story by firstly thinking of an animal and then described it using two adjectives. Next we told what it did, where, when and why. The purpose was to write an interesting story by adding in and adding on, more detail. We not only stretched our sentence, we also stretched our brain to think and elaborate on our original idea.
Mrs Dijkstra told me all about your interesting story by adding in and adding on, more detail. How you stretched your sentences and stretched your brains! I bet they are amazing. I will come down and read them.
ReplyDeleteRoom 24 you are doing such amazing work, what a great way to make story writing even more fun and you have written such interesting stories. Brilliant work.
ReplyDeleteI love these stretchy sentences! I like the way that you have added wow words, interesting descriptive words and really painted images in our minds!
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